All Comments on 'Stuck on Each Other'

Loved this story! Hope to see the sequels soon

Great story line, you need an editor.

Great story and in my opinion it definitely merits a sequel. 5stars

IF you PROOF READ!!!!

From the title I expected the same result from the brother . Hope this happens in future stories and more .

Poor premise, poor writing, and worst of all, it's unbelievable that it would happen and that they would land that way.

I did notice a few things that could be edited a bit, but it was a decent story. I'd like to see more of this.

Maybe they could slowly progress more, use texting in their own beds or in the same room as the family and echsnge looks and the sister may eventually tease behind their backs to him. Maybe public stuff, get another girl. Maybe add the mother and an aunt possibly.

I suggest that you write and publish in your native language. You are not fluent enough in English to make it tolerable. I didn't make it through the first page.

Amazing work I can’t wait for more

There are many typos that make it harder to get into the story.

The story has potential, but I cannot read it as it is now.

A few errors here and there but its a great story and id love to see more

Rule # 1 - don't annoy your reader. Much, MUCH annoyance here!

when people see a word is spelled incorrectly and grammar isn't top notch.

My ImMeRsIoN, yOu ArE a HoRrIbLe WrItEr.

I liked this one a lot. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with all of us.

I once tried it with my brother before my marriage... We drank each other

Would love a sequel to this, King! I'm interested in how they move forwards after this experience.

Where was this set?Greek ruins being torn down everyone seems to be English speaking and an 18yr old not knowing he needs to be 21 to into a nightclub

You warned us about urination within the story. That was nice of you, but it also would have been great if you had:

1.) Warned us English is not your native language.

2.) You either skipped a 3rd party edit, or English isn't their native language either.

This was pretty painful to read, and I only made it 2 or 3 minutes after they were refused entry to the club.

Editing is everything. In your language, thus may read very well. The same can't be said for this version.

Don't give up, just have it edited by a native English speaker.

Not bad needed a bit more editing but your good to go on a sequel

Anonymous who's talking about the 18 year old not knowing he needs to be 21 to into a nightclub. Check your facts as they are many places in the world where 18 years is the age of a legal adult and thus they are able to drink and shockingly enter nightclubs. Not every where in the world operates the same ya know?

Story went nowhere for me.

2 stars & I'm being generous.

Damn illiterate foreigners. I keep hearing how stupid Americans are. Ok...yes...we are dumb...the only language we can speak in English. You are sooo much more intelligent than us...yet you're too ignorant to learn the easiest language on the planet, or to hire an Editor who can speak the easiest language on the planet.