All Comments on 'Stuck Studying With Sis'

This story needs a follow up. Loved it👍

Hot sexy and I hope there is more to cum than just one nookie

The end is a nice set up for a part two if you ever feel like writing one.

Heck even three or four parts, not a demand a simple suggestion as the story works as a one shot as well.

Clearly you're are a competent writer. Good balance between detail and moving your story forward. Nice temp to the build-up and comfortable conclusion. You've taken time to quash the spelling and grammar slips - I noticed nothing - which makes me think you care about your story. Nice 'first time / always wanted to' story. It doesn't really need a sequel, but it would be nice to know the 'happily ever after.'

Fun and playful. Loved it. Thanks for shring. Frankie.

I loved it, and your the first I've read who's Mentioned proofreading. It shows. Many of these stories read like an ad in Craig's List.

Two innocent virgins. No more.

Just an adventurous maiden entering into womanhood with the man she always desired and a protective big brother that claimed his prize.

Excellent...can’t wait to see chapter 2

Would love to read a chapter two if you wish to provide one. Would also love descriptions -- he is the sexy older brother, so does he have a bit of sexy manly chest hair for his muscled chest? His dark hair would look great splashed across his upper chest and maybe a small treasure trail. Very sexy on a young man!

please continue

Well written. Really enjoyed it and would love a continuance

Loved it,

A great read, but can’t just leave it there, has to be more to the story.

Fantastic! Loved it. Can it continue? I followed you.

I love both of your stories, and would love to read more. Hope to hear more from you. Thanks

Great story. I hope there are no other chapters. To me, sequels are over 90% failures, not even close. 5*

Loved it, please continue. Would love to see how this turns out, short term, long term... Has the makings of a lifetime of love and and awesome relationship. . Or am I just an Old Romantic.

Well I thought that was very good. The story was well done with characters that worked. I always prefer sex with love.

5 stars

I enjoyed the story. You should continue both of your stories on Lit.

Thanks