by kathrynmburke
Actually IMO this chapter is sillier than the 1st. Nonetheless I found the women appealing. Good job on the story. :)
It seemed rather clinical and emotionless to me.
But then, I suppose that's the way such a situation might be
(I have no experience remotely similar).
I guess I would have liked at least one of the encounters to evince more emotion/passion -- more fire.
Still, having said that, I read Literotica for something entertaining and fun. This was that, and mildly humorous as well.
Especially noteworthy were the descriptions of the various women/situations.
The author is to be commend for such widely different encounters described with such capable linguistic skill.
It was a pleasant, enjoyable read.
So I gave it âââââ.
Paul in Oklahoma.