by kathrynmburke
The writting shows professionalism and yet I have to read the conversation sections a few times to keep track of who is saying what. I also feel the writer is in the story as one of the women, Iris, and explains exactly how she feels with the young sex toy. He is gentle, satisfying, and comforting. The age difference is just a side item and she is happy to have the lover. I would have loved an older woman like her.
Bruce