All Comments on 'Student Fucks My Beloved Wife'

You could have at least let the poor cuckold fuck one of the young college chick's ! I mean hell if she's gonna get some strange , it only seems fair !

Shudder not shutter.

just get worst, it took a real idiot to write this, right up smith and taylor alley their moms couldn't have woke them yet because i haven't seen any of their rants yet.

This is a bad story...Why? No way the man he said he was would accept her cheating and her desrespect: 1st - he founds she is cheating as a low whore and doesn't feel any emotion...so maybe he doesn't love her "You just ruined the best fucking of my entire life, I hope you're happy."and is a cheater too; 2nd - She almost fucks the young man in her SUV, arrives home and denies him (her husband)...when he knows about it he stays calm? 3rd - As soon as he leaves for the airport she is fucking another man in their house, behaving as a low life whore, even giving her virgin (was it real virgin? Or was she fucking half of the town men behind his back?) to her lover? 4th - finally she had the ultimate desrespect for her husband saying: ""I guess you're not such as bad fuck after all"!!! So writing a story based in impossible facts turn it in a bad one...Even the title was wrong: She wasn't beloved nor be loving wife...1*

Husband will be sucking wife's lover's cocks soon and then directing their cock into

His wife's deseased cunt resl soon. Fucked up load of shit

By closset fag writer.AA

all three need to be removed from the gene pool, she waited 20 years for a young mans cock, strange did she only fuck 60 year olds when she was in her 20s?

There are three problems I see

First I don't think this is first cheat, to be able to get a jumbo with little problem the first time unlikely

Second to take a large tool to the hilt in virgin ass not happening.

She would tear and bleed.

Third who would want her after bareback ride with lover.

Std would be on my mind and divorce or therapist

then he calls others retarded and sick! I think it's the other way around asshole annony This story is good and the effort great I gave it a 5. Go back to your hole annony and jerk your 3 inch cock until you pass out!

I bet you read these LW stories and lick another man's cum from your ex wife's pussy as you do. I gave this story a 5

seems well knowledgeable about sucking cocks and eating other men's cream pies.

this is a shit story,, only a fairie cock sucker would rate higher than 2 stars

Seems all dear annony can talk about is cum and sucking cocks I feel for you but I just can't reach you asshole. Another 5 for the story it is one of the best!!!

Hey, STUPID, if you don't like the story, don't jackoff to it, then complain about it. It is assholes like you who have run off so many very good writers. And a lot of us are sick and tired of people like you. And we will criticize you when you attack a good story or writer. If you take the time to notice, you are the minority here. And we aren't going to let you whine and throw temper tantrums to get your way. So move along. And clean up the mess you made. To the writer: Congratulations on a 5-star worthy story.

Try using an editor next time.

On the contrary, it seems that statement is only a matter of opinion by a few. Anons don't drive good authors away, it's people who favor the willing cuckoldry authors that do the job for them. If anons were the minority why are stories like this rated so low. 2.24. According to one comment the majority favors stories like this, then please explain why this story doesn't have a rating over 4 if you're the majority? There are plenty comments by readers with a username that are negative, but for some reason vastiesmith and others like her don't seem to notice that. Why is that?

I've noticed that erotic stories that earn ratings of 4 stars or higher are mostly favored by the anons with good reviews and higher scores. Go to be a reason, don't you think. It wouldn't be that these stories are more erotic and don't dwell on the theme of willing cuckoldry, which I think is only favored by the minority of readers, given the low scores received. The author can delete any comment he chooses, so why aren't they being deleted? No comment or score on story, didn't read it. I don't read low rated tales, waste of time.

This is a true Loving Wife story. There even are elements of a Love Story in it.

I find it natural for a woman in her forties to fantasize about being penetrated by a young big dick.

Some men is their forties become fully aware of their own voyeur side. They tend to dream about watching another man fack the love of his life.

In the last scene the wife demonstrates she still loves her husband. Their marriage & mutual LOVE will survive and even come into bloom again... but will do so in much darker shades of gray. Vanilla sex & lifestyle are gone forever.

The husband should get a shotgun and clear house

Good story! Gave you a 5!!!

Wow what an original plot. Stunning character development. Such style. Such fanciful use of language. The plot twists were clever beyond imagination... Oh wait there weren't any...

If you're going to write cucknstories the least you can do is try, as hard as it would be, to come up with something original and clever. Hubby has an orgy with four coeds now that'd be interesting. Wifey walks in, is shocked, in tears and hubby doesn't care.

As to vastie and Bonnie, your five votes only save the story from being rated less than a two.

Just awful. Wish there was negative stars

Poorly conceived and badly written. Did you even bother to proof read this drivel? Nothing original or clever. A cheating slut wife, hot for a younger man with a big dick. And not caring if anyone knows. Most campus cops would have run them in for their behavior and their ATTITUDE! And when she demeans and humiliates her husband there should have been little doubt in his mind that she was no longer his wife and that she was just another man's whore. Why stay married? Not only was this a lousy story, but it was unfinished. Where's the part at the end where he throws the slut out and divorces her? Bad story, no ending = no stars.

I started reading and found the jump from house to van and back to be very hard to follow. There just wasn't any discernible break. Also changing from first person to third (I to he) broke the flow. I then found myself just reading the first sentence of each paragraph to see where it was going. It just couldn't hold my interest. Please get yourself an editor.

Stupid poorly written garbage. Successful intelligent husband would come home and beat the shit out of the kid and throw the slut out behind him. Cucks are losers and should be written that way.

I've ever read. I have a 5 year old that could top this. Where does this web site get these idiot pencil pushers?

strongest series of ass fucking climaxes I have ever had. I guess he now knows this was not the first time she cheated on him. Nor was it the first time someone fucked her ass.

How can a sane straight normal self respecting man love this bitch. Sick disguesting story.

I respect the effort that goes into writing a story, but this was pretty poor stuff.

An editor might have helped. There are some great ones out there, for free (!) who don't just correct the many silly mistakes but also point out ways to improve presentation. Well worth a go before the next submission.

I'm sorry, I just couldn't get into your story. It was titillating to some I'm sure but to my mind a well written story has to include a modicum of reality. I like a story where I can see myself and in this case my husband. The reality might very well have been that my husband did love my attractiveness and really loved my spirit and wanted to make me happy. I'd feel the same way about him. Unfortunately, the story didn't fing true to me, thus 3 stars. If it's a fantasy I want to be swept up by the writing. Sorry, but please keep writing. xoxoxo Annette

How bout I come down and fuck your beloved wife, I am sure that would turn you on.

Is this part of a contest to see who can get the lowest score today? This week? Just poorly written and of no interest. Well, except to you know who.

You are one sick mother fucker for writing this shit. There should have been one dead Brit and a dead whore skank wife.

She's a cunt and now after his last fuck he should throw her out

Crazy BS writing and the reality of this of situation would be scorched earth & BTB!

Just another cheating slut. There is no honour here

Your story has the husband as the narrator. However, if he was unaware of Paula's interest in Joel how was he able to recall their meeting in the parking lot?

Good story, but poor ending. The reality is that the husband is a bad fuck and his wife should not be letting him anywhere near her. The wife wants to fuck Joel and the husband wants to be cuckolded. I am a cuckold and have been in this position. The husband thinks that fucking her in the ass is good, but the truth is he would obtain far more pleasure and satisfaction from licking her ass clean after Joel had fucked it. I speak from experience.

I was reading it as role play. The husband and Joel is the same person .

Maybe danhammer1972 , some writing classes at the local college would help .

Gave you a 5!!!

how a husband could stand by and let a young rag-head fuck his wife and get her pregnant with a Muslim bastard. One reason I don't usually read cuckold stories.

You really do need to learn English grammar and proofread, or get a good proofreader.

I still gave it 4 stars for the erotica. I won't be as kind next time if I don't see writing improvement.

She at no time acted like she even liked her husband let alone loved him and had absolutely no respect for him or their marriage. And the husband had no response like a man would who loved his wife. Put your cuck bullshit in group sex, interracial, fetish, but stay out of L.W. cause you don't know the meaning of love, or what it means to be a husband, they don't act like this.

Yucks...

Any husband who would put up with a blatant betrayal like that is beneath contempt. What kind of sick fuck would just STAND there, seeing his wife getting ready to fuck another man in his own house and then WATCH her do it? Every man with anything resembling a sense of pride would stop it, throw the fucking punk out of his house, kick her dead in the cunt and then D-I-V-0-R-C-E the cheating bitch. The follow up would be to make sure that their sons know exactly what their whore mother had callously done inside the home that they were raised in.

Settle of comments

What she said was enough to destroy any marriage: "I guess you're not such as bad fuck after all"!!! It wasn't necessary the cheating...1*

You are a sick sob

And, you can not make up your mind what tense your are telling it in. Several places you went from the 1st tense to the 2nd tense in the same sentence. Try proof reading.

stopped after the first few paragraphs with all the hops, skips jumps, and no sensible grammar.

She had been served1

Women should not write from a mans point of view, terribly written and obviously not proof read. No man stands around and watches unless he's filming for evidence for the devorse and to make sure everyone they know gets a copy emailed to them. This cum dump does not love or respect her husband and deserves to be humiliated and totally destroyed in the eyes of the community and family. This women is ugly on the inside whar a useless cunt.

Gave it a 1 Star for no Cuck warning.

then inserted his still hard cock in her Vagina? Guess he kind of gave her a dose of her own shit. Never a more deserving whore. I hope the infection leaves her sterile. She's already empty and soulless.

The story was pretty unrealistic from the get go. But the sex scene totally made zero sense. For the first time in my life I wish I could give negative stars.

Like the other person commenting. I wish there were negative voting! Don't give up your regular job for writing!

She was served!

You are a very sick boy.

Would have been a 5 star story, but, like a lot of other writers, you didn't proofread the story and there were mistakes made that most young students wouldn't have made.

His wife "was shuttered"? What is that? Do you mean that she "shuddered." The author does not know words, and has no command of English. Pretty pitiful.

Sorry, good intelligent wives do not turn to slutdom.

Fucking terrible.