by Anttriby
Romance is about feelings and emotions, not just carnal desires acted upon minutes after two people meet. From your fine beginning, that's where I thought you were going. But then things devolved into pure sexual gratification, nothing more. Perhaps you're saving the emotional part for future chapters?
Very hot story. Lena has her insecurities, but she's not a doormat, and her partner is kind and considerate. Love the realism of the two characters.
It's said that "love is blind" and that's sometimes true. This however is not the case. I'd like to think that this encounter will lead to better things for both parties. Thank you for a very entertaining and heartfelt story.
5***** but i couldn't rate your submission. I hope there is a ch.2 in the near future.
You call him a lumberjack and he's got a beard? How about a hairy chest too?
And so life like! Loved the box of toys, 5***** even though I couldn't rate it.
i loved it..simply beautiful.. but the sad thing is a man like him only exists in stories..not in reality!!