All Comments on 'Stumbling Ch. 01'

Looking forward to the next installment. Please describe Ethan's appearance in the next chapter. I hope it's a love story. lol

And yet I can sense that there will be great happy things to come!

This turns into a lovely love story

It is an excellent start to a love story, I hope. Looking forward to the rest. Love it.

Nice interaction in the bathroom, but why couldn't this kid stop others who made fun of Richey? Wouldn't he feel that would be something the dead father would appreciate as much as his efforts to save him? So sad.

This series is easily the best thing I have read in a long time. It's not one of those stupid stories, it actually explores and intricately describes what's happening. I love it! I'm thankful for the regular instalments, but even only waiting a day between each is too much! 😩 Keep it going!

Ethan's ghost will be with him forever. You can never lose that memory. The guilt at not actually saving the deputy is a big part of that ghost. On top of all that, being a teen is a really tough time. He's got a lot to work through and you captured it well. It can make him stronger, or it can make him just crazy. I'll have to find out.

I have goosebumps. Powerful introduction. Reading on ...