All Comments on 'Stumbling Ch. 03'

Great story. Short chapters but to your credit, more frequent so nothing to complain about.

I'm really liking his story so far. Sucks the chapters are so short but as long as you keep writing so frequently I suppose I can deal with it. I'm excited to see where you go with this story. It feels very fresh and new not like a typical gay romance story

I wish richey would have made him dump the rest of the pills. he knew he said he had some more left. These two could help each other alot probably. I was so glad to see Ethan stop that douch Arthur. People can be such idiots, though i'm not sure if teens have the corner on that or not. Stupid people come in all ages. I feel badly that Ethan is struggling and I don't think his mom is very aware. Working alot or not, leaving your kid to 'think' after they stood by helping a dying man doesn't get the mom of the year award in my opinion. i don't think she'll be very aware if he gets to taking some drug regularly. He clearly has PTSD and it's already affecting how he drives around, giving him panic attack and stopping him from sleeping. He does need some help of some sort. I don't know if it can be fixed without some professional help which he is against getting, so hopefully, Richey can be a bit of a guardian angel. I'm sure he could use some support too as he grieves. I love his fearless attitude that he has with Ethan. it's cute. I'd like longer chapters too, but I do appreciate the updates being close together if not. It might be good to double up on chapters and release together just so the story could move ahead a bit further. looking forward to them getting to know one another.

This is a very touching story. I see where it's going. The sex will be erotic and romantic, but it will be based on a true attraction.

Thank you for the thoroughly enjoyable read. The regular short installments sustain me - keep the creative juices flowing!

I LOVE THE THOUGHT AND THE THINKING OF WHAT A MAN HAS BETWEEN HIS LEGS