All Comments on 'Stumbling Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
yayy

Wonderful! I just started this series like, 30 mins ago, and i was so shocked (not to mention happy) to see that this chapter already came out! I love the story and its development. Started out kinda dark but its getting really sweet! I really love that Ethan didn't freak out when they kissed hahaha. Love it, keep it up

♡ Dani

erotikpassionserotikpassionsabout 9 years ago
Wow..

You did not stop there! Oh yeah you did...and I can't complain seeing as this chapter was longer. Am loving this story a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Just better and better

I was delighted to have found chapter 4 today - woo hoo! I am really fond of both the boys, Rich and Eeth. Such beautifully developed characters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This story is very well developed. Eager for more!

VonTeslaVonTeslaabout 9 years ago

This story makes my skin tingle and my thighs pulsate. I just found this today and I'm thoroughly hooked. Looking forward to the next installment :)

sopharoonessopharoonesabout 9 years ago
hope there is more

naw, this is really good so far. i like the realness of it, the build up, the character development! but...i feel like we are in for a sad ending...duno why but im sure ill like it if im wrong or right

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I looooove all of this

IHDIULHAIUGSIU YEEEESSS

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sweet, sexy and funny

Discovered this story a while ago and keep coming back to it when I want a good read. Good dialogues, just enough reflection on the straight to gay transition to make the character real. Good pace. Turn on.

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