All Comments on 'Stupid'

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Rob ConnerRob Connerover 11 years ago
Wierd, But I Liked IT!

Good Read! Out of the Ordinary!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I liked it, not weird

Thanks, tom anon. 5*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A fun read

Thanks.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 11 years ago
CIA - NSA - and a few other initials

Sounds about right -- but, are our comments being monitored, too?

Oh -- that's right -- that's just some more _Memories... GREAT TALE!! Continue, pls!

RhomanovRhomanovover 11 years ago
Chuckle

That ending was so classic!

Thx

studebakerhawkstudebakerhawkabout 11 years ago
You really tightened my jaws...

...right about the point where Cheryl's upbraiding Jack for not having faith in her. I'm thinking, "Right! Like all the faith you had in him?" and then your ending just blew me away. Great job! Thanks for sharing with us.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 10 years ago
Enjoyed it

Thanks for the offering.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Fun and funny

Well done and probably way to \o close to real for comfort -

The fix was an obvious one but of course requires he being vetted and all that shgit - so it likely does not happen enough - and it would not deal with his fears.

She seems a strong woman and you built them well - cool

carvohicarvohiabout 10 years ago
Interesting...

You put this in romance and got what; eight comments. Had you added two or three paragraphs about their split up you could have sneaked it into Loving Wives where it would have received the kudos it so rightfully deserves.

snathsnathabout 10 years ago
Can't say more

Thanks for sharing. You certainly should contemplate adding a little more description even by sacrificing the length of the story. One more page would not really have hurt the readers.

bruce22bruce22about 10 years ago
Well constructed

Amusing Tale. Thanks

lonerider10lonerider10about 10 years ago
exellent

one of your best

EAPoeEAPoealmost 10 years ago
Wonderful spoof of the spy genre

However you should be more careful of your timeline. He's pushing 60 and they know each for 30 years. This means he was about thirty when they served together in the army and then went to school. Sounds improbable.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
That was Fun

Thanks.

Just Curious, was Jack's middle initial E?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Been There...Done That

'Nuff said. Good Agency story.

Kitist02Kitist02almost 8 years ago
Way cool story

A lot of us wannabees will enjoy this while thinking it's all bullshit.

Nicely written, and you made Jack to be a real person which isn't easy with a story this short.

tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
WITH ALL THE SPECIAL WARFARE FORCES IN THE WORLD

this story holds truth for several decades and generations, TK U MLJ LV NV

rightbankrightbankalmost 8 years ago
tongue in - cheek

so many jokes you have to think about

"company" Christmas party among them

loved it

A_BierceA_Bierceabout 6 years ago
Noting the date you published

and the dates on the comments, it's obvious that "Stupid" definitely meets or exceeds the requirements to be deemed a classic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
another "we are bruce lee and james bond"

piece of doggie doo! What is with this everybody has to be a tough guy shit? And why would he be laying on top of his wife in the alley if 3 were dead and the other was all fucked up? All this super hero shit belongs in the comics! Gave this tripe a 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
In Reality the CIA Doesn't Work Like This

The CIA actually gives training to spouses on being married to a CIA employee and how their spouse may have to keep stuff secret. So in reality this would have been dealt with as soon as he joined.

Not saying it's badly written, just hard to enjoy it when there's such a huge disconnect.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Don't

I don't know how the CIA treats spouses, and don't really care. This was just a great story.

Mordant96Mordant96over 3 years ago
Great story!!

You prove a super tale doesn't need gratuitous sex for a riviting story

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
Judy

Just rubbish.

BBeinhartBBeinhartover 1 year ago

Just as great the fourth time I read it! ☝🏻😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ok. so, it's not War and Peace, but like the movie character Rambo, it was an entertaining which is what we come to this site for. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Comment on the story before this……slut hid affair 20 years and cuck husband gladly took her back….author afraid to take comments as he let his cuck sympathies surface …..they can’t suppress them too long and they become famished for the memories of all the creampies they used to eat. R. H.

Calico75Calico758 months ago

Fun and entertaining!

ThomerKyThomerKy5 months ago

This could be the first chapter of a longer piece. I'd love to read about Jack trying to keep Cheryl happy (and in the dark) while dealing with the bad guys.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman4 months ago

LOL pretty fun and a good read. thanks. "Silver haired Savior" LOL

deependerdeependerabout 2 months ago

Special ops, wet work, dastardly deeds, guys that didn't make it, secrets and lies, and all for what? For a country that elects Donald Trump and Joe Biden as President? What a laugh.

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