by radk
Sounds about right -- but, are our comments being monitored, too?
Oh -- that's right -- that's just some more _Memories... GREAT TALE!! Continue, pls!
...right about the point where Cheryl's upbraiding Jack for not having faith in her. I'm thinking, "Right! Like all the faith you had in him?" and then your ending just blew me away. Great job! Thanks for sharing with us.
Well done and probably way to \o close to real for comfort -
The fix was an obvious one but of course requires he being vetted and all that shgit - so it likely does not happen enough - and it would not deal with his fears.
She seems a strong woman and you built them well - cool
You put this in romance and got what; eight comments. Had you added two or three paragraphs about their split up you could have sneaked it into Loving Wives where it would have received the kudos it so rightfully deserves.
Thanks for sharing. You certainly should contemplate adding a little more description even by sacrificing the length of the story. One more page would not really have hurt the readers.
However you should be more careful of your timeline. He's pushing 60 and they know each for 30 years. This means he was about thirty when they served together in the army and then went to school. Sounds improbable.
A lot of us wannabees will enjoy this while thinking it's all bullshit.
Nicely written, and you made Jack to be a real person which isn't easy with a story this short.
this story holds truth for several decades and generations, TK U MLJ LV NV
so many jokes you have to think about
"company" Christmas party among them
loved it
and the dates on the comments, it's obvious that "Stupid" definitely meets or exceeds the requirements to be deemed a classic.
piece of doggie doo! What is with this everybody has to be a tough guy shit? And why would he be laying on top of his wife in the alley if 3 were dead and the other was all fucked up? All this super hero shit belongs in the comics! Gave this tripe a 2.
The CIA actually gives training to spouses on being married to a CIA employee and how their spouse may have to keep stuff secret. So in reality this would have been dealt with as soon as he joined.
Not saying it's badly written, just hard to enjoy it when there's such a huge disconnect.
I don't know how the CIA treats spouses, and don't really care. This was just a great story.
You prove a super tale doesn't need gratuitous sex for a riviting story
Ok. so, it's not War and Peace, but like the movie character Rambo, it was an entertaining which is what we come to this site for. Thanks!
Comment on the story before this……slut hid affair 20 years and cuck husband gladly took her back….author afraid to take comments as he let his cuck sympathies surface …..they can’t suppress them too long and they become famished for the memories of all the creampies they used to eat. R. H.
This could be the first chapter of a longer piece. I'd love to read about Jack trying to keep Cheryl happy (and in the dark) while dealing with the bad guys.
Special ops, wet work, dastardly deeds, guys that didn't make it, secrets and lies, and all for what? For a country that elects Donald Trump and Joe Biden as President? What a laugh.