by CrazyDaveTrucker60
Why would a husband put up with the disrespect during his game ? Why plan crap for that time ? Football games are not that long nor is the season. Plan the other crap the rest of the year. My suggestion is divorce quickly.
But the end were the wife wimped out started to lose me. I think it might need another chapter.. Maybe Becky, Irene, Brenda, and Karen all end up pregnant and Sharon comes out of hiding to see her sister, mother and her two best friends getting it on. Of course and the children they have created. Thanks for the story. Always entertaining.
THis was a little different BTB story. I like what he did to mom-in-law. Were you drinking the sauce when you wrote this one
A good read and powerful, but why is he crying a river and praying that she can be found when he was over her?
Never will understand tears after being disrespected many times and twice is too many times
Once possibly but not likely to forgive
Hairy cunts at least decent landing strip
I have read a few of your stories and it seems you leave them unfinished, always there is a need for a better conclusion.
She was a cheater, but she got more than she deserved. It was overkill. Also, an epilog would have been good. There were a lot of loose ends
Loved the story, but the ending is lousy (therefore 4 not 5). Too much having to tie up the loose ends.
NOT hairbrained. It is HAREBRAINED. A hare is a furry critter that looks like, and is related to rabbits.
Really hate movies or stories where there is no real ending, just a bunch of maybe this or that. I need a complete story not a cliff hanger unless there is a second part. So only one star so far.
Great story crap ending please come back to this story with some kind of up date or a part two to close up some of the gaps.