All Comments on 'Stupid Bet'

by CrazyDaveTrucker60

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Why

Why would a husband put up with the disrespect during his game ? Why plan crap for that time ? Football games are not that long nor is the season. Plan the other crap the rest of the year. My suggestion is divorce quickly.

SithLord6969SithLord6969about 5 years ago
LOL!

Wow! A fun read and so over the top!

jneric2691jneric2691about 5 years ago
Loved the story Dave

But the end were the wife wimped out started to lose me. I think it might need another chapter.. Maybe Becky, Irene, Brenda, and Karen all end up pregnant and Sharon comes out of hiding to see her sister, mother and her two best friends getting it on. Of course and the children they have created. Thanks for the story. Always entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Huh?

Weird, disjointed. But it has potential. L

rodryder44rodryder44about 5 years ago
Stupid

THis was a little different BTB story. I like what he did to mom-in-law. Were you drinking the sauce when you wrote this one

starbanestarbaneabout 5 years ago

Would like to see a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
the final paragraph is out of context with the rest of the story

A good read and powerful, but why is he crying a river and praying that she can be found when he was over her?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Dialogue

You REALLY need to work on your dialogue!

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Why so many stories so many tears by husbands?

Never will understand tears after being disrespected many times and twice is too many times

Once possibly but not likely to forgive

Hairy cunts at least decent landing strip

jbpeters74jbpeters74almost 5 years ago
Left hanging a lot with your stories

I have read a few of your stories and it seems you leave them unfinished, always there is a need for a better conclusion.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 4 years ago
Ha!

She got what she deserved. lol great story. keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Overboard

She was a cheater, but she got more than she deserved. It was overkill. Also, an epilog would have been good. There were a lot of loose ends

PrinzmettlePrinzmettleabout 3 years ago

Loved the story, but the ending is lousy (therefore 4 not 5). Too much having to tie up the loose ends.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Love the story, did not like the ending. AAAAA+++++

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

NOT hairbrained. It is HAREBRAINED. A hare is a furry critter that looks like, and is related to rabbits.

timrivtimrivalmost 2 years ago

Really hate movies or stories where there is no real ending, just a bunch of maybe this or that. I need a complete story not a cliff hanger unless there is a second part. So only one star so far.

DaikkennDaikkenn12 months ago

Great story crap ending please come back to this story with some kind of up date or a part two to close up some of the gaps.

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