by BB47
I can't hold my breath as long as Candy can, but I await the next installment with bated breath.
This is a really great story I really, really hope you continue it this could be a really interesting continuing adventure as they infect more and more of the crew and find out what else this creature has done to thief bodies and brains. I mean who knows what type of powers they could develope by messing with parts of the brain we don't normally use.
The third chapter in this sci-fi thriller is the best yet, well-written, with a plot that is perfectly balanced with love scenes. The only question is, where are the next chapters?