All Comments on 'Su-Lin's Fantasy Ch. 01'

Nicely written, nicely paced.

I urge you to ignore those who apparently monitor erotica sites looking for things to disapprove of; please keep writing about this character and her interests and the changes she might go through.

Pay no attention to the perverted religious conservative cocksuckers who pan any erotic literature. They have nothing better to do than try to shame writers. They are short dicks whose wives wish they were getting fucked by a young stud and not their stupid asshole husbands.

Nicely done. Please continue. Taiwanese women are second to none; it'd be nice to have them featured in more stories.

Very nice, but, the guy's a total wimp. Not a real man. His reaction when busted looking at pictures. Pathetic.

Super hot story

I monitor erotic sites looking for things to disapprove of. I disapprove of this mess mightily.