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celia_vytraccelia_vytrac3 months ago

Claire, huh? Although Speaking wasn't supposed to be genetic, it is pretty interesting that she has this ability. I guess that makes Beatrix an unreliable narrator.

I'm surprised they haven't thought of this earlier, but Beatrix should be able to Speak a command similar to <Sarah and Gabi can monitor my battery level. They can Speak by proxy through my battery using this subset of commands [list them]. They cannot drain my battery past 25%>

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

I absolutely love that reveal and Claire is great.

Sarah_DelphinoSarah_Delphino9 days agoAuthor

@celia_vytrac Yeah, originally the system wasn't supposed to be genetic. I was actually surprised the direction the story with Claire went. I typed it and was like, "Wait, what?" then decided I wanted to know how this would turn out. I haven't decided yet if it is genetic or if this was just a one in eight billion chance. I tried to do the actual math to determine what the odds were that it was genetic but two sisters getting it had only occurred once in history, but gave up based on the complexity.

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