All Comments on 'Submission after a View'

You want to be breed so get them tubes untied and let him seed you as much as you both desire...until he does knock you up and beyond!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Your writing is sooooooooo ridiculously silly. Nobody talks like this....

Who the hell is named "Bisck"?

Who takes 60 minute showers?

Her problem with her online date is that he *didn't* want to have sex with her?

"a 20 year old centerfold of me. It wasn't a Playboy, it was much more revealing." Is it just me or did this come out of nowhere? Was it mentioned that she had posed for magazines in her youth?

This story(?) would require substantial improvement to be classified as ridiculous.

BUT I can agree there wasn't a lot of plot. I dont think the author was trying to develop a any.

Boring story...

2 stars