All Comments on 'Submission! (with a Student?)'

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HeyAllHeyAllover 5 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

Much appreciation to SueDanym for the great efforts, and to MindyStarr for the inspiration.

As for the readers, love you all.

Heyall

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Start!

Thank you, great story. I hope you explore their relationship more and it (hopefully) includes bondage as part of their submission to each other.

Bama71Bama71over 5 years ago
Superb

Can’t wait to see where this goes.

Bi47Bi47over 5 years ago
WOW

Very very good thank you.

fishingrod48fishingrod48about 5 years ago
Beautiful Read

This story deserves a sequel please tell where Amanda goes with her new found love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Damn

This was hot...please add to it.

CharmlesCharmlesabout 5 years ago
Yes!

Love it! Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

The absolute best! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Definitely worthy of a series

Wonderful definitely worthy of a series

MindystarrdfwMindystarrdfwabout 5 years ago
Great stuff once again!

Taking a bow....;)

Thumper3340Thumper3340about 5 years ago
5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

As usual another 5 star story...excellent read and hot πŸ₯΅

NikkiejanesNikkiejanesabout 5 years ago
5 star story

Sorry i could only rate this a 5 star story, buttons don't go any higher if they did then that's what i would have rated it.

Again another slow smouldering build up to a nice finish, just like Mei's climax.

Perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
!This was great

Well done, the continual build up led to a very satisfying climax. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please Continue!

Nicely written erotic tale! Could be "the start of a beautiful friendship" - if you wish to take it further?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I really really LOVE this beutiful story: ❀ = β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†+ [5+ (5.25/5=105% 'above expectations')]. Bravissimo! You wrote a masterpiece. Every paragraph of the story adds to EROTIC charge!

HeyAll gave us a multifaceted story: it is an erotic story, and a love story; it is a story about 2 women whose life trajectories intersect at a gym. The older one is going thru a lot at that moment. The two women connect in many aspects, but strong mutial sexual attraction overrides all other aspect. A perfect-storm moment is created wherein the inconceivable becomes the order of the day.

If you like lesbian erotic stories, you can't go wrong if you read this one. In my book, it is a MUST READ.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Lovely Story

Like the way it went and the way it might be going as worthy of at least another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Teachers should give in more often to their students. Both want it! Enough with the charades.

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