All Comments on 'Submissive College Life Ch. 02'

That was a great second chapter that you wrote. I like how you described the initiation for her into the fraternity. I like how you described how she pleased the women at the beginning of the story so that the college would get their money for the next year. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

You called your main character Marsh in some spots and March in others. Which is it? Also, when talking about college women, it is a sorority, not a fraternity, or, frat.