All Comments on 'Submitting to a Gurl'

by Apple_of_Eden

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OnthefloormikeOnthefloormikeover 5 years ago
Hard as a rock

Being submissive and bi, this story made me has hard as possible without someone actually here with me. It was amazing and I had to pleasure myself and came with great p,easier and submissive thoughts. Thanks for writing it.

Csucker64Csucker64over 5 years ago
Brilliant

I loved the whole story

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 5 years ago
Happy, happy, joy,joy!

Submission and dominance erotically portrayed quite well with no BDSM at all, thank you! You told a sexy and very hot tale of two consenting adults finding satisfaction in each other, yea! Loved it a little too much, so please write more soon, okay? Ta

Apple_of_EdenApple_of_Edenover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you!

Onthefloormike, I'm glad you enjoyed my story...in more ways than one. I'm also happy to hear that you're able to relate to the character. One of my goals when I write and tell a story is to make the reader feel a part of it in one way or another. It's nice to have achieved that with this story.

Csucker64, thanks for reading and using "Brilliant" to describe my story. I appreciate your choice of words. I hope you continue to read, vote, and comment on more of my stories.

Michael56Smith, you do realize that submission and dominance is definitely a part of BDSM...right? *; ) But I do understand what you meant. I love the erotic nature of a more loving and gentle D/s relationship also. More words I like having used to describe my story, "Sexy and very hot"!!! Thank you. Ta.

My thanks to everyone who read and voted on "Submitting to a Gurl". Please feel free to comment. I love reading your thoughts on the stories/characters, and I do take your feedback to heart.

Thanks again,

~Apple_of_Eden

bbaron2274bbaron2274over 5 years ago
A First

I read and totally enjoyed. More erotic than I expected. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I loved it

Wish I had a Mistress like that.

PinkPanties4mePinkPanties4meover 5 years ago
Nicely done!

I liked the way your main character knew what he wanted and was not forced into it.

Perhaps , she will introduce him into dressing too!

ShaneinTXShaneinTXover 5 years ago

Incredibly sexy story!

betabradbetabradabout 5 years ago
Hot !

What a sexy story. I confess I am turned on by shemales . I am turned on by sexy woman and also by a big hard juicy cock. It is one of my fantasies to submit to a sexy dominant shemale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Superb

Well written and erotic story of passion.

mrjack4u56mrjack4u56over 4 years ago
Loved it !

As a CD admirer like him, if I knew there was a bar like that in Philly, I would definitely visit.

CroonyCroonyover 3 years ago
Very good

Well written story.

44special44specialover 3 years ago
great read

This story is amazingly good.

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