by DJMiles
Good premise.
But sex is rushed.
Needed much more iin the way of foreplay/preliminaries/teasing.
Needed some involvement of/with her breasts.
Needed her begging him to continue and make her have another orgasm.
Needed some involvement with his cock. At least handjob. Maybe blowjob. Possibly titty-fuck.
Three stars.
Love it, but it could stand some better editing. First person, then second person, back to first, dizzying. Beth? Prof. Keny?
2 things: 1, you changed her name. Is it Beth or Amber? 2, a 30 minute presentation for the class in a 101 lecture?? It would take an entire semester for everyone to present. Not to mention that workload is insane for a first year course.