All Comments on 'Submitting To Professor Kent'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good premise.

But sex is rushed.

Needed much more iin the way of foreplay/preliminaries/teasing.

Needed some involvement of/with her breasts.

Needed her begging him to continue and make her have another orgasm.

Needed some involvement with his cock. At least handjob. Maybe blowjob. Possibly titty-fuck.

Three stars.

RedMockersRedMockers10 months ago

Love it, but it could stand some better editing. First person, then second person, back to first, dizzying. Beth? Prof. Keny?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

2 things: 1, you changed her name. Is it Beth or Amber? 2, a 30 minute presentation for the class in a 101 lecture?? It would take an entire semester for everyone to present. Not to mention that workload is insane for a first year course.

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