by KallieHF
Can't wait for the next
I would love to have a box under my bed
Thank you for coming back to this! I hope there is more.
I’d assumed with Harper’s seemingly innate desire to control that she’d been altered to be some sort of drone controller, but this seems not to have been the case after all. I hope she doesn’t lose all of her conflicted struggle, and in any case I look forward to finding out more of the mystery you have in mind...
Late reader, but I gotta say these chapters have been fantastic! This is one of my favorite stories on this site (is there perhaps an obvious reason — Mind Control, Latex? Anyone?). I particularly love this chapter because it is such a twist. The way you dig into with the rising tension is just awesome. The final twist at the end was just perfect! Super awesome! This has the same tension has a lot of classic mystery thrillers, I swear! Makes me nervous to even continue reading!