All Comments on 'Substantial'

I could not follow the story.Did the man eat the woman or was the woman eating the man?

I am enjoying this very much. I know where it is going, which is my only complaint, but otherwise I find this well written and well drawn out. Keep going please.

Your skill in writing is so pristine. As a fellow author, I was absolutely pleased to find a story on this site that had both a plot worth reading and the writing to support it. I was entranced and I commend you on this brilliant work.