All Comments on 'Substitute'

Short and to the point... nicely written too.

this was an excellent story, hope needed to see a shrink to get rid of her hang ups.

Excellent story, as usual. I love getting blow jobs like that!

--smoothboi

vandal24@excite.com

this is awesome - well written, yummy. oh, i wish...

This was the most erotic and different story I have read in a long time. I am surprised the author can write so well using only one hand. :)

Original and very sexy. A great combination.

Loved the plot and the descriptions. I actually had a situation happen to me very similar to this one when I was 15. They weren't roomates, but good friends. The one who blew me was pretty ugly, the other one I dated for a few years. Well anyways I would have loved to gotten off but it was just a little short.

That was the hottest story I've read in many months. Thank you!

Beautiful! So nice to enjoy a good tale without the distraction of faulty grammer, spelling and miss-used words.

If these stories were officially judged, and I were one if the official judges, this o e would not only rank five stars, but also judges choice award. To me you accomplished portaging the perfect blend of sexuality, friendship and trust.

litpervgrrl, you are going to put the makers of Viagra out of business! The only way I could get my 63 year old dick harder is imagining being with you, and exploring all of our openings!