All Comments on 'Suburban Sprawl Ch. 2'

by Bob Peale

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0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edover 16 years ago
Fear and Excitement

Why do I identify with the victim? I can feel his fear and excitement in being used by these brutes, where are they when you need them?

pr0nmaccapr0nmaccaover 15 years ago
Find another route?

Sure, and right after he's taken the kid for a stroll, he's straight back around with the workmen for some more action. Very hot story, shame you don't seem to be writing any more!

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