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Anonymousover 13 years agowrong area
this deffinetly belongs in the fantasy area what a screw ball writer
in your dreams pal
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Anonymousover 13 years agoNot bad but needs a bit of polish is all
On another note, its so nice that its possible to make anonymous posts here, just to bad its abused by some.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI am trying to be constructive
what a fantasy! Your writing wasnt bad but the plot itself was sort of sophomoric. try to spend more time putting drama and intrigue into the plot.
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