All Comments on 'Suddenly A Succubus Ch. 04'

Nyx, I like this chapter! You might get some complaints from other readers, but good writers are't afraid to add depth to stories by developing characters and story lines to enrich the narrative. Amara may have found herself trapped in a box, but this chapter shows that you have broken out of one! I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you! 5 more stars! Total:20.

Amazing chapter. Can't wait for more

Is the "Hell Is Real" sign one of those 83fortruth signs?

Excellent chapter! You have some world building started along with some character backstories along with a possible villian to add to the tension and conflict. Is Derek behind the Devils trap in the basement of the science building? Or is he just an overagressive creepy fuck with boundary issues? Keep writing we want to find out soon.

Loved the chapter and looking forward to reading future chapters!

What EverydayMagic Said!

Is there a van Helsing in the wings?

Don't worry about the "lack" of sex. You don't have a quota to fill but you do have a story to tell

And it's a good story!

It’s a good story. Too much sex will detract for a very good story. Thanks.

Never too much sex, and a chapter without, following on the heels of a hot one, is fine.

Hell is definitely real, and we're all living in it.

Great story. I don’t know if it’s a site policy, but these two page reads are frustrating, having to interrupt the momentum to go back to the menu for the next bit so frequently.

There is a "hell is real" billboard on the highway near me. Seen it many, many times.