All Comments on 'Sue and the Light Blue Chevy Malibu'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy8 months ago

Utterly delightful!

5

Tx77TumbleweedTx77Tumbleweed8 months ago

5 stars. I spent seven years growing near Ft. Hood and about eight more later near bases in the San Antonio area, so I have an appreciation for some of the interesting stories that kids were supposed to hear. That’s why this one sounded a little like one of those and brought back a few memories fro the 60s and 70s. Thanks

bigbob2406bigbob24068 months ago

Great story.Thank you very much.

Ravey19Ravey198 months ago

A nice story, typical ronde and a great ending, amusing and a little tearful over the nostalgia. 5⛤

DSolomonDDSolomonD8 months ago

1967 light yellow Chevy Impala.

5*

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc8 months ago

Easy read with no surprises. I would have preferred more dialogue, especially in the first half, but the last few paragraphs ended strong. 4.3*

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u8 months ago

Love that ending. As always 5 stars for a great story.

Bronco56Bronco568 months ago

Fantastic romantic story. Another great story. 5stars

technofrog2002technofrog20028 months ago

That was such a sweet story. 5🌟

A_BierceA_Bierce8 months ago

Perfect story to read on a day that started badly. Thank you.

stewartbstewartb8 months ago

Knew those Chevy Malibu's where good for something besides car payments!

DINGDONG33DINGDONG338 months ago

Great story and being a vet of that area I can easy relate I met my first wife while in the service and we traveled from New Your state to Texas. I should try to write about our adventure in meeting and time in the Service. Keep writing and keep up the good work. M Malibu was a 68 Charger.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Uplifting and sweet. And well written. And a great change from the usual fate of soldiers coming home.

More please.

MLJ

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Real people - great story

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Ha we were at Graf in ‘68 for tank gunnery. Sun morning bout 0730 woke up to a lot noise and girls voices. About 20 of us in a old wooden barracks. Two young ladies had accessed the room. Language barrier and a pissedoff staff E6 resulted in the ladies eviction. It could happen.

J6480J64808 months ago

Yet again a grand tale, 5*s

DquiotiDquioti8 months ago

Wonderfully sweet story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Took a long time to get to the punchline but it was worth it. I thought it was a little dry until those last two paragraphs well the cleverness of the tale became apparent.

Davester37Davester378 months ago

This one is another fine story with a sweet plot and likable, believable characters. I’m a fan!

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story.

Hate to be that guy, but key cards weren’t invented until 1975.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I thought a college grad would be an officer and not a clerk.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I am a fan of your work. This story seems to be lacking. Afaw704

OvercriticalOvercritical4 months ago

What a pleasant fun story. The plot wasn't off the wall, but I sort of liked the characters and without any traumatic incident it just cruised to a finish. 4* Well worth reading.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story very close to home.

Served three years in the Army. One year in alabama

for school then two yearz in Germany (1967-70) in a headquarters battery serving four HAWK ( homing-all-the-way-killer)) missile sites. You were spot on!

Keep writing.,

Sargt J

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