All Comments on 'Sultry Metamorphosis Ch. 01'

by amenarimix

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Anthony1965Anthony196511 months ago

What a beautifully written and well done story! I loved it and can’t wait for the next chapter.

Steverino143Steverino14311 months ago

Liked the story plot.

I found the style you used of beginning each paragraph with the speakers name disruptive in the flow.

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###Currently working on GF's Dad next chapter. Thanks for your patience and support.### If you think my story deserves a 1-star rating, you should stop reading erotica, or at least mine. There are only two possible outcomes; either you like it or cum so hard. Otherwise, you s...