All Comments on 'Summer Camp'

The story itself is great. A lot of fun. My only issue is that so much happens so quickly. Personally, I wish you had taken a bit more time on the individual encounters. That said, it is of course a matter of personal taste.

Very fine writing and a very hot story.

You write well; just one thing. Please use “saw” as appropriate, not seen.

Good little step mom and sister story. Hope there's more cumming.

Hot story, needs additional chapters. Well done 5 stars