All Comments on 'Summer Camp'

Loved it! Original and hot.

Really hot. Give me a cowboy any day.

Hi, here from the OtJ challenge. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and was happy with the way it developed and ended. It was hot and sexy, and, having spent a lot of time at camp as a camper and a counselor, it brought back some fun memories and great thanks that we didn’t get caught and sent home. Just like those summer camps, there’s no promise, but there’s always that bit of hope about what the future may bring. Very nice job.

P.S. I’ll send a PM with a couple of other minor points about the Callie prologue for your consideration.

Good that she finally met a non -country boy that could/would be concerned about getting her off...always important!

but a couple of things seemed off...

-NO appreciable diff in either of my dimensions between 18 & 21...

-and anytime I'd accidentally bang her cervix it was usually a very unpleasant sensation for her...

and finally...riding bareback nude...really??