All Comments on 'Summer Camp Love'

This was a very good story, especially since it appears to be your first. My only recommendation would be that you try and make them a little bit longer, maybe a bit more description of the people and action. Also, I'm hoping this is just part 1 of the story. Thanks for the good writing!

I agree with the previous post. Your writing style is great; the story is good; it was just on the short side of making it a really great one. Thanks for sharing.

I really enjoyed this! Super well written! Keep up the great work!

I want them longer