All Comments on 'Summer Camp Siblings'

Thought it was well written although not spell-checked. If it wasn't true you could have fooled me. I love how Sandy was written as a red-head...very important detail. I would like to read more of your submissions.

Loved it despite the spelling mistakes. I always enjoy reading mine again before using the spell checker.

Not sure about the religious connection. It is, of course, well known that ministers are as horny as Hell but I am a little sceptical about the brother/sister bit in connection with the close religiuos tie.

Well done though, keep it up!

Great story, butwithout the religous credo.

Great storyline, but marred by a lot of spelling, usage and sentence structure errors. You really need to proof read your story before final submission.

I liked it and didn't give a damn about minor errors. Thanks for writing it.

it would have been nice if the daughter had turned out to be his not her husbands and it is always disapointing when they don't stay together or atleast near enough to continue without cheating on spouses

DBRS

I kind of liked that you had them go their separate ways ... makes the story seem more realistic.

Two major flaws in the story, one the story doesn't fill in what happened after that summer though we can assume they went there merry way, since she got married, and said that until he came for his neices wedding he hadn't been there, two after 20 yrs doubt they would pick up where they left off

great sex-nice characters-good story- thanks

Really enjoyed it.Very nice love story.

Great story but in the end you mentioned Debbie and her husband and in the next breath she is asking Matt to come over and play in her treehouse. So if Debbie is married where will her husband when they play in the treehouse on Sunday. The ending leaves too many unanswered question. Needs a chapter2 or an Epilogue. 5 stars but the ending not so much.

Fire your proofreader. Too many very obvious errors.