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by peachesandbeth

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

sexy story makes me want to go to camp

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Tense

I liked the story, and it was nicely written, but it would have been better had you used past tense. Kind regards.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
proof reading

Great story but the changes in tense are a bit jarring.

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I'm 48 and the mother of two grown kids. I have four grandsons that are my world. I'm single and live in a small town. My roommate Peaches, and I write together. We had a book published in 2016, titled Torn. We are currently working on more books for publication. We can be fou...