All Comments on 'Summer Camping Ch. 02'

I thought it was a very nice tale of first love and first time, I however did not like you selection of an end to the saga

I did not see that coming.

A rare 5* from me :-)

Tom D

Someone actually gets it right, you can't shove your fingers into a womans pussy without breaking the hymen! Thank You! I have been bitching about that for a few years now and writers just don't get it even the women writers that should know better.

Over all it was a very good story, a little slow at times but worth the read.

Your Bio, your from the midwest that's why you got it right! Midwest too.

The first time I have ever rated or commented on a story! Very good :)

First time I have bothered rating or commenting on here. Great read, good build up and great descriptions. One of the few times there was not a moment I was rolling my eyes.

I appreciate the feedback. I apologize for the typos. I am certainly not an English major but I have a basic grasp of grammar, honest. Mostly, I am appalingly bad at proof-reading my own writing. I "see" what is in my head not what is on the page. Please believe me when I say no one is more irritated with this failing than myself. Your patience is much appreciated.

One of the best stories I've read on here. Simply fantastic

You are a very gifted writer---by that I mean you "have a way with words." I kept laughing out loud at your interior monologues. You've got the psychology of the thing exactly right. This kid is me at that age, only I never managed to hit a home run. It's true, as you yourself have said, that there are things that should have been cleaned up in the typing process. But please, don't let that discourage you from writing!

this story sound a lot like some thing I did in high school and after I loved this story

it is more real then most storys I hope you wright more like this or with a simmler story line I will grade this a 12 for stortline , carecters realizem and kkepping me stuck to this story and wanting more thank you .

A lot of other stories here, the girl starts out much the same, but by the end she's getting double penetrated in every orifice, in public. So I appreciate that you kept the female character's integrity through the whole story. Thanks for writing, and I hope to see more from you.

Sweet story! You got me with "if semen actually tasted good we'd never get anything done."

Well done.

One of the best I've read here! It brings back so many memories of the wonderful times my departed wife and I had together. Part of the fun was the sneaking around. Simply could not stop reading it!

I don't care what time her parents went to bed!

I love this story. Reminds me of my wife and our first time. Please write more. starfan3880@yahoo.com

Simply fantastic!

Jesus this pulled at my heart strings 😭