All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 12 Gwen's Story 1'

Very nicely done. Can t wait for part 2.

T-shirt or blouse??

We have waited to long for these stories, keep them coming.

You made what could have been a very ugly scent beautiful! and tender.

Thank Youe56a

You write with extraordinary sensitivity and skill. Your stories are somehow simultaneously fire-hot erotica and beautifully realized short fiction. The range of feeling and depth of psychological understanding in this particular piece is extraordinary. I truly love your work.

wow

ok this girl doesnt realise that it was an attempted rape and not lovemaking

he didnt kissed her in the beginning but only kissed her not coz he cares about her but coz he felt sorry for her and pathetic himself his lonliness and scared about his reputation and job sorry coz he may get caught

he seems like the stranger who put sue to danger with ushers attempted rape

his repeated sorry coz his afraid she may change her mind and cry rape

had she not cried he would have definitely raped her

masterful