All Comments on 'Summer Fun with Sis Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More, please....don't leave us hanging!

Nice flow, good detail and dialogue; I like these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

sis comes to take care of him and the 3 live happy ever after

ChasBChasBover 11 years ago

This character is such a stupid idiot I hope he turns up dead and ends this mess!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WTF

WTF is a tube station? Is that where you go to get a tube shoved up your ass?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

BUT . what a dumb ass .dan that is . Boy don't have a clue .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story...

Great chapters, horrible cliffhangers... and not in a good way.

kaidmankaidmanover 11 years ago
great story

please don't leave us hanging as long as last time I almost forgot about this also a tube station is the english term for subway for those who don't know

tristahoontristahoonover 11 years ago

Love the story hate the cliffy.....

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