All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

by Yorkiechai

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redlion75redlion75almost 6 years ago

He is an unseeded asshole that didn't want her til he walked in on them,so fucking forget him

RastanuraRastanuraalmost 6 years ago
Cute

Liked it but too short.

YorkiechaiYorkiechaialmost 6 years agoAuthor
Response to Stroudle

What can I say. I'm bi, the story is autobiographical, so works for me. Thanks for your response though.

stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago

I was enjoying that until the male friend came in.

Short hot story up to that point.

I like your style , women just enjoying each other. A bit more background would be nice , but i appreciate that would alter the feel you are creating.

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