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harroldfruit2harroldfruit2over 2 years ago

A quick tip:

I think you can improve your story by using the editing software that is included in programmes like Word or similar applications.

Alternatively, you could get a volunteer editor on this website.

Some, though not all, readers might take issue with the errors in the story.

Literotica also has a section with resources for writers, so you can find even more tips there.

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I am YJ, an erotic writer in oriental style and culture genre. Further, most of my stories involved older women and younger man. I hope to promote oriental style of erotic writing and sexual preferences in my region to the world especially South East Asia Region. I wish to te...