by Minnie_La_La
Little too heavily narrative driven with some wrong character names on a couple occasions. As a result, there was a lack of depth in the overall plot. How was her friend doing in Chicago? How did the Scottish school like her teaching? Did they have positions available if she wanted to stay? Does she have family in the Ststes h the st preclude a permanent relocation?
I wish I could edit at this point, but I think it is done once it is posted. Thank you for your constructive criticism. I am always trying to improve.
A beautiful story with places that are so familiar to me. I think the reference to 'Brisbane' on Skye was a typo for 'Edinbane' ... and yes, there are potteries nearby.
Thank you.
I felt my breasts tingle as Jeremy suckled Joanna. How I wish my husband does this to me every single night of my life! I yearn to be sucked and I want to nurse him just like this..and I want him to crave me just as Jeremy craves Joanna.