by bloodsugarsxmagic
When will you start publishing your stories together? This is another exceptionally well-written erotic tale. There are a handful of writers on Lit that stand above the rest, and you two are in that elite circle.
I can't wait for Chapter 2!
This story was spicier than a hot, Italian sausage stuffed in my linguine. Hotter than Diane Lane's voice in "Under the Tuscan Sun". Better lines than, “In Sicily, women are more dangerous than shotguns.” Rachael is so young and sexy she could audition for the Italian Prime Minister's harem. Brava you two!
I felt the length of this story really added to the hype of it. This story had my attention. It made me aroused. I am so wet now. And I really want to read about them fucking. However, I am guessing that won't be coming any time soon as there is a lot more anticipation to play with.