All Comments on 'Summer League'

I hope you all like this story. It was a quick (and hot!) one. Had fun writing it. Cheers!

You lost me at your dismal description of the a/c problem. The compressor is never in the basement, it's part of the outdoor condensing unit. If you're going to use a tradesman in your story at least learn what they do and don't do. And though you felt you needed to include the cliche 'big dick' like most first timers at least it wasn't a cuck story. That's the only reason i didn't give it one star.

Excellent 1st story!

Great story.

*****Very entertaining HOT read. Thanks for sharing.

They say, those that can’t write - criticize.

Great story and even though I know a bit about A/C systems, I thought the level of detail was perfect for the story

I look forward to reading more - thanks for putting it out there

Silly, but fun. 4*

"Good girls don't do what she had done. " That is an understatement. I liked the characters and the tone, but she did in fact assault him sexually. Sorry, that was a huge turn-off to me. I like your style, want to read again, but hope never something quite like that. Maybe, possibly in the non-con category...

Good story!

5

Loved it - good work!!

Loved it. Would really like to see a second chapter