All Comments on 'Summer Mother Fuck'

not saying she didn't deserve what she got. But if I was him I would have left her in that shape for being horrible in the first place. lol

Somewhere in there is an interesting plot, but the execution was inconsistent with a lot of gaps that pushed my ability to buy into the story as a whole. Somebody goes on holiday with sewing gear and material in their trunk - really? They go on holiday in the same town as they live (guy drops off cream)? Frigid mother brings a cage with her on holiday - really? Also, the cage would be more for her to avoid temptation assuming the son wasn't going to rape his mother... 3*

I loved it. Yes there were some plot holes but it was hot as hell.

...Just no.

maybe could have stressed the stockings turn on a bit more since this is the stockings section but still hot

I would of blocked those slaps and fucked her in her ass forcefully

Laaaaaaaaaaaaame

WTF is this crap?

don't write again

You need to learn it's not Archies or Dads it's Archie's and Dad's. Farewell drink not fair well.

Capital letters in places they weren't needed.

Before you try to write read some decent stories on here and learn.