All Comments on 'Summer Night'

"The three have had sex since, but only on special occasions. Grace has started a relationship but she is unaware of what has transpired."

"But SHE is unaware of what has transpired?" Was this supposed to mean that Grace has became involved with another woman, and that her female lover remains unaware of the ongoing incestuous sexual relationship? I've wracked my brain, and that's the only thing that remotely makes sense.

Aside from the points I've just made, I enjoyed the story. Do keep it up, but please try to avoid confusing your readers.

Why didn't he cum in her

The last sentence made no sense

I liked your story, but your ending made no sense. Needs a rewrite.