All Comments on 'Summer of '88: Pt. 01'

Masterfully crafted story of uninhibited love.

hope you do more with this??

but my cousin caught me masturbating and she and I shared some wicked times in our late teens

Five stars but you really have to give us more!

You have to give us more, the picture you painted of the two of them masturbating together was so hot

You lost me at "and political correctness hadn't ruined everything yet."

The only thing that Political Correctness has "ruined" is people's ability to treat other people like shit for no reason, and get away with it.

Gtfo

This is supposed to be an enjoyable story (and it definitely was) and all they could think about was how offended they were by your use of the term “political correctness.” Im not big on people who hate political correctness either but I also don’t go around looking for things to get offended about. No matter what someone thinks about politics, it wasn’t the point of the story at all and they are just being a self righteous prick. You don’t need that kind of negativity in your life. Keep up the good writing and ignore the haters.

Grandma was a sweet older lady,

who liked to play with herself .But now

she had her grandson to play with her.

He also did some meat pounding along,

with her.Sweet story.

...THANKS...

I enjoyed a promising start. You write well.

****Sexy and Hot hoping for more to cum!! Thanks for sharing.

Well written. Trying to determine if this could really happen. Not for my grandma, but I had an aunt that I used to dream about seducing me. She was so hot..

Great story line & very promising but it’s been a long time between drinks. Is there ever going to be a part 2 (and more).