All Comments on 'Summer of Heaven'

Nice story but you really should work on your sentence composition. Maybe get a ghost writer or proof reader? Otherwise, not bad at all.

Prologues are before the main story, epilogues are after. That's an epilogue. Hence the saying "Past is prologue."

I would like to thank you for a very enjoyable and believable story. It was great from start to finish and I hope that you will seriously think about continuing, as it seems like the start of an awesome series. Keep up the fantastic writing and hoping to soon read more of this or others along the same line.

more of these two please, sounds like a hell of ride still to be had

YOU DEFINITELY HAVE TO MAKE THIS INTO A SAGA MAIA NEEDS HER BELLY TO DELIGHTFULLY PROTRUDE DUE TO TOBY YOUNG EFFORTS

Sweet tag!

Where were these women when I needed them as a young man? Loved the story and want more.