All Comments on 'Summer of Jason'

Great plot and I thought it was very well written but his attitude towards his sister's was messed up. The whole sluts and biting and hickies on Drew's body, I have a big dick so worship me, definitely to much.

You're right it was weird but i enjoyed it very much. 5stars from me.

I see what you mean about delusional. By all means keep going as this was fun. Not sure what you have planned for the sibs but looking forward to finding out.

Great story. Keep it up

If i can just add one piece of advice. Get someone to proof read the story and check punctuation. The story was a bit hard to read at times as the grammar was incorrect

Overall great effort and thanks

Tina obviously is testing her brother Jason,she is literally torturing him to get him to crack and Tina can make Jason her slave and grant or deny him her pussy,but sadly now Drew has taken claim of Jason and I think Drew is not gonna let Tina steal Jason away from her and the claws will come out for the two sisters.

As Jason has stated Tina is nothing but a Slut Bitch that wants to break Jason so she can turn him into her sex toy to do with as she pleases and make him subservient to her.But Drew is obviously the more caring tho adventurous type who likes it kinky.

Overall I wish the author would return to do a part 2 atleast to let readers know how it turns out,that would be SWEET.

The psyche of the characters make for an interesting read, can't wait to see where it goes.

She needs to be taught a lesson. No mercy.

improve your vocabulary, then you will have a five star story.

The incorrectly, (and inconsistently), formatted dialogue makes reading difficult.

There are too many incorrectly used words. This makes your work a riddle, forcing the reader to stop and decipher the correct word. This interrupts the flow of reading.

GeoD

All the shit going on in his head needs to stop. It's nonsensical and distracts from what's really going on. I think I get where you're trying to go but it isn't working. 3*

I like the plot. Though, I hope you write part 2 of it.

While Tina is a huge bitch, the MC is a huge pussy.

Like its so frustrating to read his inner dialog.

You must be a total dweeb at sex is all I can say........... Good grief what drivel........ Are you him seriously???

Where’s the rest of this story?