All Comments on 'Summer of Lina'

by AshesToStardust

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TonyZeeTonyZeeover 8 years ago
Very nice...

You're a real writer. I enjoyed this very much. You've created such a beguiling character in Lina. Great job.

jdf1959jdf1959over 8 years ago
Some "erotica" isn't, this is!

Thank you for this lovely, truly erotic piece - it's not just the narrator who can bask in the afterglow of a wonderful encounter that you know he will always treasure.

Do write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I don't comment on Literotica. Ever. But I needed to comment on this: the story and prose are just stunningly good, super well paced, and reminded me of my own days gone by. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding story

This was a great read. I'm sure anyone who is lucky enough to stumble upon this story will be instantly transported back in time to those halcyon days of adolescent bliss when we were first able to find an attraction to someone that was returned in kind. The discovery of the power, magic, and all consuming, life altering fulfillment of exploring the parts, response's, and passions of our opposite half stay with us forever!! Thank you Ashes to Stardust for the trip down memory lane. You Rock!!!

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