All Comments on 'Summer Rain'

I really enjoyed this story, loved the sexual tension between them as well and the hot sex scene!

Thank you for reading my story and for taking the time to comment. I am glad that you enjoyed this one. Unykorn

Loved it!

Dane seems a worthy catch -- and someone worth waiting for. How about a sequel to their first love-making? And can he have a hairy chest and abs and pubes to rub against her delicate body? Imagine his chest hair tickling her breasts during their love-making. Then she can suck him off and run her lips right down to his pubes! Sounds delicious! Please let them fall in love and stay together!

This is my kind of story! Believeable, erotic, and oh so sweet! Great writing. Please continue.

Fourteen stories in less than 2 months.

This one rates 5 stars and I'm hoping you can keep up the pace.

All I can say is WOW! Thank you all for your comments, they are very much appreciated.

William some of these stories were written a long time ago and I still have more that are yet to be submitted. So I hope that you enjoy those when they get their turn, they will just be under different categories.

Again, thank you! Unykorn

I love stories that have great story line with romance! Wonderfully written! Should continue the story!

is a many splendid thing. You almost ruined it for me in the last 5 paragraphs though. Pubes waxed, Barbell through the clit, and still a virgin? I really had a problem with that.

I will say that I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy the entirety of this story. However I will say that I think it is extraordinary that you are under the impression that a 24 year old {virgin or not} has no knowledge of waxing {or shaving for that matter} as well as no knowledge of piercings and where piercings can be placed. As well as the total lack of wanting to have either of these things done. I wasn't aware that a virgin is suppose to be totally illiterate with the IQ of a turnip because that is the only way a 24 year old would never have heard of any of these things in this day and age. One step into most beauty parlours and all these things are available to any woman who wants them. Providing they are over 18 {18 is the required age here in Australia} or with parental permission if they are younger. Maybe historical romances would suit you better if today's world is too modern for you. Unykorn

Just wanted to echo the comments that your stories are quite well written. I think you are an exceptional writer and look forward to more of your submissions.

Hi Peacerules. Thank you for reading my story and taking the time to comment. I do appreciate genuine feedback. I am glad that you have enjoyed what you have read of my stories and hope that you continue to do so as I post more of them. Unykorn

Straight to the point, enjoyable and pretty hot. :) Nice work.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my story. I am glad that you have enjoyed reading it and I appreciate the feedback. Unykorn