All Comments on 'Summer Rain'

Even with the missing words and small other errors.

Bad: You're too good and experienced a writer not to fix the numerous mistakes.

Good: A sweet story that reminds me in some ways of my first time (at age 33!) with the lady who soon thereafter became my wife. She died a few years ago. Thank you for making me think of her.

Good tale and Kira seems like a nice innocent girl but ready to explore and grow. I liked the little year later epilogue; it showed that Joel really was in it for the long haul with her rather than just a quick encounter. Nice job!

Hope u write more chapter to the amazing story.

That was sweet.

Yes there are a few errors but I don't care! I love the story and I hope you write a chapter 2.

I'm humming the song "up on the roof"