All Comments on 'Summer Shore Sex Pt. 01'

DON'T DO PART 2!!

please

Great job

Either write a story or leave; shit or get off the pot. Posting the opening few paragraphs as a teaser? Why? your writing isn't sufficiently well known for anyone to anticipate what's coming next, all you did was cut-off before anything of note happened at all. Are all the chapters going to be like this? Please say no.

2**

4 to 1 as I see it now. Don't let one critic prevent you from continuing IF you have in mind that you want to.

Thanks Don