All Comments on 'Summer Squall'

by 4glory6

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice

This is old school murder mystery stuff. I mean that as a compliment. Christie, Hammett, Chandler. I’m impressed!

nighthawk22204nighthawk222047 months ago

Nicely contrived, compiled, written and pretty well edited as well. Very erotic, perhaps a bit hurried in time, but when your brain is muddled with guilt and a little fearful terror, any cock in a storm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Like it.

The denouement might have been more believable for Audrey to explain what really happened to a partner in the drug syndicate back in the States once she had worn out her amorous detective and left the island. Comparison of the sexual prowess of the accomplice with that of the detective could have been entertaining

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